I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hello Isaia, It is Albin from Yaldhurst here. It was really amazing because it taught me few new words. If you had more description it would have been amazing. You could have also add a few more interesting facts.
Hi Isais. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like How you have a diagram of what the stuff there is. And how you have made it nice and easy to read.Next time I think you should maybe record yourself saying it so we know how to say it. Apart from that it is good.
Kia Ora, I'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this blog post because its really straightforward and I like how you just put the translution. I like also picture aswell its great just add to it.
Ti improve I would say maybe add more colour and make it pop so its more eye catching to others and they want to see it.
This reminded me when I always on a monday we learn Maori, and we do stuff like this.
Do you think you could improve? Apart from that its great Kind regards - Grace
Hello Isaia,
ReplyDeleteIt is Albin from Yaldhurst here.
It was really amazing because it taught me few new words.
If you had more description it would have been amazing.
You could have also add a few more interesting facts.
Hi Isais. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like How you have a diagram of what the stuff there is. And how you have made it nice and easy to read.Next time I think you should maybe record yourself saying it so we know how to say it. Apart from that it is good.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this blog post because its really straightforward and I like how you just put the translution.
I like also picture aswell its great just add to it.
Ti improve I would say maybe add more colour and make it pop so its more eye catching to others and they want to see it.
This reminded me when I always on a monday we learn Maori, and we do stuff like this.
Do you think you could improve?
Apart from that its great
Kind regards - Grace