I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is a wonderful wonderful blog post and I really enjoyed reading it. I think that it is super cool to encourage reading books this is because thanks to all of the new technology is slowly making some jobs and especially books go to waste so it is good to see some of you guys sharing some of the books you have read. What i you favorite type of books? e.g Horror, Dramma.
To improve I think that you could create it in a different or more creative way because you have all of the information already you now only need to add in some color and some images to represent the amazing work you have done.
This reminds me of the time when we create book reports. We do two for home learning and we did one when we all read our shared story book called wonder. This is when you take the main points of the book and put it into a summary without giving anything away. ALong with the author and title.
Kia Ora, I'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School,
I really liked your blog post , but next time you could add more detail and make the front cover a bit more eprettiter or make some details on it. This reminded me of, we are doing traditional tails at the moment . I think this could be improved by adding more words and prove reading it, But apart from , its great
kia ora isaia.I liked the way you said when you had to name 7 types of fish and the last one was goldfish it was funny.did you think about the stone fish it is poisonous on the spines.To improve you could add more about the story and about the problem a bit more. kind regards Brayden
Hi there Isaia, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added pictures inside your slide. It was better then all words.
It reminds me of the traditional tale work we have been doing. It sounded like it was a story considering the title.
Next time you could add some extra text before and after the slide and make a more creative front cover so you can have more comments.
Do you think the problem was important?
Did you like the book?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is a wonderful wonderful blog post and I really enjoyed reading it. I think that it is super cool to encourage reading books this is because thanks to all of the new technology is slowly making some jobs and especially books go to waste so it is good to see some of you guys sharing some of the books you have read.
What i you favorite type of books? e.g Horror, Dramma.
To improve I think that you could create it in a different or more creative way because you have all of the information already you now only need to add in some color and some images to represent the amazing work you have done.
This reminds me of the time when we create book reports. We do two for home learning and we did one when we all read our shared story book called wonder.
This is when you take the main points of the book and put it into a summary without giving anything away. ALong with the author and title.
Thanks and Let Me Know!!
- Maddie from YMS.
Hey Isaia, My name is Chloe a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. Wow I really like this blog post because I've never seen those fish before ever.
ReplyDeleteNext time to improve your slides you could add a font and change the background colour so then its a bit more eye catching and interesting.
Next time you could say why you are doing this and explain more things because I'm a little bit confused right now.
Out of those fish on the slide what would be your favorite and why? Mine would probably be the Trout because its a bit funny looking.
Kind regards
- Chloe
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School,
I really liked your blog post , but next time you could add more detail and make the front cover a bit more eprettiter or make some details on it.
This reminded me of, we are doing traditional tails at the moment .
I think this could be improved by adding more words and prove reading it,
But apart from , its great
- Grace
kia ora isaia.I liked the way you said when you had to name 7 types of fish and the last one was goldfish it was funny.did you think about the stone fish it is poisonous on the spines.To improve you could add more about the story and about the problem a bit more.
ReplyDeletekind regards
Brayden