I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hi Isaia. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like how you have made it look really cool. With the background and the photos. The background of My favorite color. next time I think you should try to say what you have been doing and why you were doing it. Apart from that it is really good and cool.
Hey Isaia! My name is Chloe a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model school. I really like how you have made it very creative by adding everything on a coloured background. I really like how you have sectioned everything, like how you put fish, fruits etc..
My question is why did you make this, was it a blog post idea or was it instructions from your teacher? I really like what words you have chosen because some of them are really descriptive. Next time maybe add a eye catching title like - 'Has food taken over reading?' people will click onto your blog if you used a title like that. Maybe next time write a description too because it will really help to understand what you are doing.
Hello Isaia, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture as well. I think that you did great. I don't think that there is any thing to improve on. But I do have a question, Is the oppsite of animal really human? But other than that Ka Pai Bridget
My Name is Maddison I am a year & at Yaldhurst Model School.
AWSOME! This caught my eye super fast and I really enjoyed reading it. I think that this work is something that you don't always see and I think that it is very creative.
Is this work something that all of your class is working on? Did you create it? What subject is this around?
I think that if you would like to improve you could write a bit about it at the top to stop people from wondering things and to steep your amazing blog to an even e=better blog.
Tis reminds me when we had to group things for speeches , Buy this I mean that the teaches will describe something that is used alot in speeches and we will say what we think it is.
Hi Isaia. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like how you have made it look really cool. With the background and the photos. The background of My favorite color. next time I think you should try to say what you have been doing and why you were doing it. Apart from that it is really good and cool.
ReplyDeleteHey Isaia!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model school. I really like how you have made it very creative by adding everything on a coloured background. I really like how you have sectioned everything, like how you put fish, fruits etc..
My question is why did you make this, was it a blog post idea or was it instructions from your teacher? I really like what words you have chosen because some of them are really descriptive. Next time maybe add a eye catching title like - 'Has food taken over reading?' people will click onto your blog if you used a title like that. Maybe next time write a description too because it will really help to understand what you are doing.
Kind regards Chloe
Hello Isaia,
ReplyDeleteIt is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture as well. I think that you did great. I don't think that there is any thing to improve on. But I do have a question, Is the oppsite of animal really human?
But other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy Name is Maddison I am a year & at Yaldhurst Model School.
AWSOME!
This caught my eye super fast and I really enjoyed reading it.
I think that this work is something that you don't always see and I think that it is very creative.
Is this work something that all of your class is working on?
Did you create it?
What subject is this around?
I think that if you would like to improve you could write a bit about it at the top to stop people from wondering things and to steep your amazing blog to an even e=better blog.
Tis reminds me when we had to group things for speeches , Buy this I mean that the teaches will describe something that is used alot in speeches and we will say what we think it is.
Thanks, let Me Know!
-Maddie.