I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Kia Ora! My Name Is Maddison I am a Year 7, I am a YMS student.
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I think that if you would like to improve you could try and add in some color or make it an animation to share your info to get the reader's attention and catch their eye.
This reminds me of when we all id a country study. We all picked a country and focused on it share your info that you found about the country in a creative way.
Hey Isaia My name is Chloe a year eight from Yaldhurst Model School! I really like this blog post because not only is it brilliant school work wise it also tells us a lot about you and your culture.
I really like how you have made it very eye catching. Even though you are in New Zealand how do you celebrate it here? Next time you could add more information at the top explaining a bit more.
I think the photo on slide 4 is a bit graphic for some people but that's just my opinion. Well done this blog post is great!
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy Name Is Maddison I am a Year 7, I am a YMS student.
Wow!
This looks like you put a lot of effort into this amazing blog post. I really liked how you added in Other countries I think that is cool.
How did you find this info?
Is this a subject that you are passionate about? If so I think that's really cool, is there any reason why? You like this subject.
I think that if you would like to improve you could try and add in some color or make it an animation to share your info to get the reader's attention and catch their eye.
This reminds me of when we all id a country study. We all picked a country and focused on it share your info that you found about the country in a creative way.
Thanks and Let Me Know!
-Maddie
Hey Isaia
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe a year eight from Yaldhurst Model School!
I really like this blog post because not only is it brilliant school work wise it also tells us a lot about you and your culture.
I really like how you have made it very eye catching. Even though you are in New Zealand how do you celebrate it here? Next time you could add more information at the top explaining a bit more.
I think the photo on slide 4 is a bit graphic for some people but that's just my opinion. Well done this blog post is great!
Kind regards Chloe